Auckland Transport
Auckland Transport are causing way too many deaths that are causing more grief for surroundings such as family and friends. Not just deaths but problems and injuries also. We need these new active transport to brake quick and fast but smoothly, I am talking mostly about the trains not the train drivers.
Auckland transport needs these new active trains to be more quicker and faster but smoothly to stop because people who are dying or injured from these trains mostly because of a reason of crossing the railway. Not blaming this on the train drivers but I mainly blame this from the new active trains. Why? Because of this new update on our trains, it’s harder for our elders to hear if the train is incoming so if our elders were not to survive it would be the trains fault.
To the young ones out there if you are crossing a railway and you see a train coming in just wait until that train has stopped. But if it’s your train and your train stops on the railway..Make sure you get there 5 minutes earlier so your train doesn’t leave you behind.
1 comments:
Hi Linda Kiki, this is a very good topic for persuasive writing. I particularly liked your point about the new trains being quieter. Remember to use topic sentences so your reader knows what your paragraph is going to be about!
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