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Saturday, 13 February 2016

A Twist (Narrative)

WALT: We are learning to create a narrative that will interest other children in our school and the Manaiakalani cluster.


A TWIST


The students, teachers and the headmaster are alone in a Tamaki school hall, at night the children's fear grew among the horrified ghost named Toby in a horror movie named Paranormal: The ghost dimension.


The teachers and the headmaster left the hall to the staff room to have a cup of tea, milo or coffee. Suddenly at a certain time. Students heard strange sounds coming from the back towards the front of the hall where the students were laying down all cuddled with a person.


When students heard strange sounds, they thought of something freaky. Students saw something airy and moving come out of the television screen, that’s when the teachers left to the staff room. After the teachers left, they realized it was Toby the ghost. Toby the ghost was chasing after the kids throughout the hall and back in, that's when they lost Toby .


A few minutes later after losing Toby, he students ran to the teachers and headmaster to ask them what was happening,. Then students then said something strange such as “Is your hall/school haunted.” All Teachers and headmaster were thinking “do our students have to go counselling?”.


The teachers and the headmaster of the school grounds entered the school hall approaching the students that were panicking in the corner top left of the hall. When suddenly the channel of the television changed to MTV entertainment where there celebrities named Beyonce, Chris Brown, Royalty, Steve Harvey and Karrueche Tran. They came flowing out of the television and everyone was shocked.


When the Celebrities popped out of the television screen. All of the celebrities awarded and gifted the students. The students were shocked that the celebrities knew their names. Then all the entertainers wondered how they got to a place so blank filled with  so few students, so the students explained to the celebrities.


After the students explained to the celebrities. KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK they heard on the door, 321 counting down in a man's voice, Spirit known as the TEXAS CHAINSAW man, known as the most of the top 10 WARNING/CAUTION/DANGEROUS person in Texas. Spirit bust in the doors and shouted “WHO WANTS TO DIE FIRST.” Everyone ran out the the exit door that was facing the field with Spirit chasing behind all of them.


Everyone yelled out Mr Tofa’s name loud and clear. Mr Tofa came to the rescue where there Mr Tofa and Spirit had came face to face. Mr Tofa said “ It has been a long time SPIRIT”, but now I will take YOU DOWN!!.” Mr Tofa grabbed the nearest weapon and WACK! KABOOM! BANG!. Spirit had fainted and woke up to be wrapped up in Rapunzel's (Chris) hair that was carried by Chris Brown and Beyonce.


Later on, that night. Spirit was taken to a underground security full surveillance jail. Mrs Tofa, who was the best ghost hunter, took out Toby the ghost and there she put him in a ghost capture jail book where all the ghost she hunted and archive to get them are in that book. The Celebrities felt like they were fading away and students saw the celebrities fading away, so when the celebrities were fading away they noticed that they went back to where they came from.


THE END !!!




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