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Monday, 9 May 2016

Narrative starter paragraph

This is my Narrative Starter for my story called


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In the middle of the year of being a year 7 student, life was nothing but boredom sometimes, walking to school every day was always sometimes a new fresh start but every time entering the school gate it felt like trouble was coming. I sometimes get bored from learning but, mostly interval and lunch excite me the most like joyful fireworks inside me. I wanted to abandon my home and family to go out there and die happily without my family worrying.

1 comments:

Danni Stone said...

I like how you used "the fault in our stars" style opening, to share an emotional response to daily life.

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