In the middle of the year of being a year 7 student, life was nothing but boredom sometimes, walking to school every day was always sometimes a new fresh start but every time entering the school gate it felt like trouble was coming. I sometimes get bored from learning but, mostly interval and lunch excite me the most like joyful fireworks inside me. I wanted to abandon my home and family to go out there and die happily without my family worrying.
I am a Year 8 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mrs Tofa.
Monday, 9 May 2016
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In the middle of the year of being a year 7 student, life was nothing but boredom sometimes, walking to school every day was always sometimes a new fresh start but every time entering the school gate it felt like trouble was coming. I sometimes get bored from learning but, mostly interval and lunch excite me the most like joyful fireworks inside me. I wanted to abandon my home and family to go out there and die happily without my family worrying.
In the middle of the year of being a year 7 student, life was nothing but boredom sometimes, walking to school every day was always sometimes a new fresh start but every time entering the school gate it felt like trouble was coming. I sometimes get bored from learning but, mostly interval and lunch excite me the most like joyful fireworks inside me. I wanted to abandon my home and family to go out there and die happily without my family worrying.
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I like how you used "the fault in our stars" style opening, to share an emotional response to daily life.
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